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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
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0 posted 2006-05-01 12:43 PM



Lets hear it straight from you
Thats all you have to do
Say what you feel
Don't keep me on the reel.

I'm not your stepping stone
Don't keep me second guessing
All the time.

Lets hear it straight from you
Tell me to my face
Don't think I'm the last to know
You should have said.

© Copyright 2006 Debra Rachelle - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-03 01:13 AM


Apart from the honesty

Yes I like the flow of words, possibly some anger, and quality in your thoughts

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-03 01:19 AM


exactly!
Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
3 posted 2006-05-03 10:32 PM


Thanks Bodger for your honest reply.
And again PS I see we can relate on this.

Debo

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