Open Poetry #37 |
House of Pain |
SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
Ne'er did I feel so manley, As when You were in my arms Like a piece of red hot candy, But one of your fatal charms Dreams I had a plenty, Safe from all that harms and though my house was burning, I was deaf to all alarms |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding! Bravo! |
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jennifer101 New Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 8texas usa |
i like all types of poems big or small happy or sad but yours in this short form has opened my eyes in a big way tthanks for being a poet |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Yeah sometimes we refuse to see until our hearts break. And then time moves us on to the next heart ache. I really enjoyed this poem Debo |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
TY very much for your words of appreciation, and recognition, it is gratifying to know that someone can understands the place this comes from, and to know that we are not alone |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and though my house was burning, I was deaf to all alarms" Ahhh SilentShadow. Love makes us blind and deaf. I really enjoyed this poem. |
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