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Open Poetry #37
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shmity72
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since 2006-04-29
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wa usa
0 posted 2006-04-29 06:50 AM


Your image raced,
through my mind.
my blood quickened,
the smile's kind.

My senses bored,
To be selective,
As hunger pain,
Makes me aggressive.

Scripting the signs,
Rhyme by moonlight,
I will Euripides,
To recall the sight.

9-1-93
© Copyright 2006 Jason D. Smith - All Rights Reserved
shmity72
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since 2006-04-29
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wa usa
1 posted 2006-04-29 07:12 AM

bump for critique.

slaves 'oft love their masters.

GBS
shmity72
Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 26
wa usa
2 posted 2006-04-29 07:25 AM

if'n you want more i'll bring in 'no offence' tomorrow.

slaves 'oft love their masters.

GBS
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-04-29 01:08 PM

Jason, I thank you for leaving your comments on my poem and for directing me to this one of yours.

I enjoyed the read...I love the short ones with a meaning that brings memories about.

Nicely done.
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