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Early Stuff on soul in a midnight
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Early Stuff on soul in a midnight |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Everything comes around and the stuff I thought was for the heap and the basics of other words seems to find something Dave In the death of your soul on a moonlit night When your eyes are frightened to see a light Would you marry the one who dresses right In the light of a candle Would your thoughts espouse To sleep with the only one wearing a blouse In the light of a dark night Would you know the one You've love as themselves In the morning of your glory Would you die For what you feel you have become If the light of day Would you be sad That now one sees your way At the moment of truth Would you have the courage To know what was or is wrong anything that in your mind touched your soul danced for your blessing Nor the moments But the dream That danced In you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
amazing what the heap holds profound soul questing at midnight... my favorite hour for mental meanderings |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
And like yourself I consign the early words Some survived But how do you say to someone Starting out as we did protect the stuff You think Is rubbish What goes around Comes around Your words were incisive Your attitude right And candles burning low On some dark forgotten night In worlds For Santa Claus Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
one woman's rubbish is well, you know how it goes and if I should put out the wrong dumpster on trash collection day woe is me! I lived around the corner from Santa Claus Lane in North Pole Alaska..really, for over a year and still don't believe in that jolly old clown but many still do believe so sometimes I step away from my own attitude, try on some other shoes |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope the two of you continue to give and take... because it reads very well and the whole thread becomes a poem in and of itself... light my world... I want to be warm. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Agreeing with Sunshine here, Bodger...your words are candle lit...and kacy's poetic reply perhaps the match. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of a Meatloaf song....James |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Midnitesun one woman's rubbish is well, you know how it goes and if I should put out the wrong dumpster on trash collection day woe is me! I lived around the corner from Santa Claus Lane in North Pole Alaska..really, for over a year and still don't believe in that jolly old clown but many still do believe so sometimes I step away from my own attitude, try on some other shoes The nice thing about your words is they trigger some old thing in me, that I again consigned to something The quality of people on this site is such, that I say thank you to everyone for their comments, and the word 'honour' does creep into my mind Dave |
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