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Climbing Mountains Barefoot
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Climbing Mountains Barefoot |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Climbing Mountains Barefoot My selfish heart knows no different, nothing other than holding you, my foolish mind wanders off to memory, to all, it seems, I ever knew. I'm not missing anything that you can give to me, it's why I have to leave I'm certain you'll agree. I'll never be quite capable of forgetting you, even in old age or with someone new. I do not appreciate this selfish heart of mine the tunnel vision of a foolish mind and the nights of linger longer, asking why, climbing mountains barefoot, trying to reach goodbye. ~ |
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shmity72 Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 26wa usa |
I laughed out loud when i read that one. Only I laughed out of fear of my past. The poem makes me want to kiss somebody... |
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shmity72 Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 26wa usa |
ibid. a previous lover. |
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shmity72 Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 26wa usa |
c my post nancy... |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
On reading this, I left my comment here /pip/Forum94/HTML/003359.html a poet who cares |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Another good one, Way to go P.S. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Passing Shadows, You tease our minds and that is good. Goodbyes are never easy. Thanks for the thought. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks guys  |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
Rip my heart from my body, I see we may be kindred spirits, thank you for your kind words, more stuff coming, look in dark poetry in about 3 weeks, my daughter is sending one I wrote 25 years ago, dark nasty stuff, ty again |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Thanks Daniel. I'll keep a lookout, but if I miss it, remind me okay? |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Another Dixie Poem as only she can write them.You are a master. You Are Loved. |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
ty for noticing, 'nother quickie up, they're starting to flow again, now that I have somewhere to put them |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Our minds always want to rate and identify the special ones...those we will miss the most...although they may not have been the best...if they were...why did they end...James |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
yes, i have often thought it a marvel that a woman's true love never leaves her heart; even when she moves on, her heart belongs to another...thank you for that very true piece! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"climbing mountains barefoot, trying to reach goodbye" Goodbye is so hard to reach passing shadows. You have expressed this feeling well. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Tenderly touching passing shadows. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Especially loved: "climbing mountains barefoot, trying to reach goodbye." - Owl |
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