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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-01-09 07:22 AM

~~~~~~

I sat alone
because time allowed it,
the taste refreshingly cold
as it satisfied.

Watching the faces,
listening to the laughter,
knowing I was not to share
in such moments...this evening.

~~~~~~~

Voiced to be silent,
wondering
"What words could one say,
and not trip on their tongue,
when the porch light is always on"
and no one comes.

Reflecting in the darkness,
the flaws,
mine for believing, his.. for not.
Understanding,
such a precious commodity
when the mind plays its games
in tomorrow's dreams.

~~~~~~~~

Remember me, as I was,
as I am,
lest you shatter my soul
leaving me nameless
in a world of words~~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2006-01-09 09:16 AM

Gosh, I always hope this myself . . .

Remember me, as I was,
as I am,

and understanding much too much

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-01-09 09:27 AM

"Remember me, as I was,
as I am,"

~ and may those memories of you ~ as you were and are, be of your "Bliss-ful" self, Ms. Wynter!

May 2006 bring you peace, harmony, love, and joy,
Linda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2006-01-09 09:34 AM

Voiced to be silent,
wondering
"What words could one say,
and not trip on their tongue,
when the porch light is always on"
and no one comes.

Oh my Maureen, I so felt this!!
Hugs to you, Sweetie
Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-01-09 12:00 PM

Oh, this feels so sad. But, as always, your writing is gentle and flows so well down the page.

....jo

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2006-01-09 09:22 PM

This had alot of feeling, ive felt like this before

Julie

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

6 posted 2006-01-09 09:39 PM

awwwwww. This is good.

Kristabell

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

7 posted 2006-01-09 10:36 PM

Remember me, as I was,
as I am,
lest you shatter my soul
leaving me nameless
in a world of words

Good ending!!!

MUSEconnieSEconnie
Member

since 2006-02-28

Posts 74
california

8 posted 2006-03-05 11:19 PM

Watching the faces,
listening to the laughter,
knowing I was not to share
in such moments...this evening.

I REMEMBER JUST SUCH A MOMENT

MUSEconnieSEconnie
Member

since 2006-02-28

Posts 74
california

9 posted 2006-03-05 11:19 PM

BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL! I WISH I COULD WRITE THIS WELL IN F.V. WELL DONE MY FRIEND.
LOVE
CONNIE

I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

10 posted 2006-03-05 11:20 PM

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2006-03-05 11:46 PM

"leaving me nameless
in a world of words~~~"

Greatly enjoyed.

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

12 posted 2006-03-05 11:53 PM

I tried to decide which "clip" of words I liked best here, but could not. They are all the best, threaded together perfectly to be this poem. I love it.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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