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Mike1
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since 2006-04-25
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0 posted 2006-04-25 11:34 AM


Begining
arise from the steam
geysers of ariana
Phoneix of the frozen field
of flowers
awakens spring
Moon does hold the mountains
stare
grey and hiding it holds
the ocean there

Another note to play with
piano sings her song
passionate introduction

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Mike1
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since 2006-04-25
Posts 8

1 posted 2006-04-25 11:43 AM


i meant to name this poem....not "Gambling" but "Geysers of Ariana" ;d
mariae
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since 2006-04-24
Posts 54
Denmark, Europe
2 posted 2006-04-25 12:59 PM


I love -the frozen field of flowers-
Good one.
And welcome to another new member :-)

Maria

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-04-25 01:13 PM


Hi, Mike! If you would like to change your title, click on the edit icon of a pen writing on paper (It's next to the date at the top of your post and below your title).

You can make any changes there and then use the submit button. Edits can only be made for up to 24 hours after the original posting was made.

Enjoy exploring the site, writing, reading, replying ~ and making lots of new friends!

Warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel
P.S. I enjoyed your poem!

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