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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Spirits Spirits play in swirling water Where all you see are vague distortions Partial phantoms making mortar Lovely moving swirls in torsions They bring to life a mind of scheme And here I enter in a world That takes me to a land of dream An Eden’s field new life unfurled To run and dance the rippling pour In laps that roll in ecstasy The in and out of evermore A dance into eternity Absorbed into the fabrics lace I am a portion of the sight I live a life of unknown grace And act the fabrics living light There lies my Eden’s living flow The only Eden that I know |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Spirits play in swirling water Where all you see are vague distortions Partial phantoms making mortar Lovely moving swirls in torsions ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you do know that you rock as much as my creek. *ww* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Absorbed into the fabrics lace I am a portion of the sight I live a life of unknown grace And act the fabrics living light There lies my Eden’s living flow The only Eden that I know ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.” George Carlin *winkie winkie* Love ya me sweet Sy-guy     |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I meant to write you about these lovely pictures. They inspired this poem but even much more. Take care my love. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Spirit Waters  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It's where I wish to be today. Thank you for taking me Sy.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, Thanks for this writing. The pictures added by the two readers are awesome. I have a question as to the line: "I live a life of unknown grace." Is this your grace or whose? Too, if it is unknown, is this not a contradiction? I don't know myself. This may be a way to express yourself, poetically. Please comment more on this if you could. Thanks for the beauty in this poem. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Now that is cool water. :kiss Susan My pleassure dear. BROTHER JOHN To some a conundrum, to me a sanctum sanc.to.rum, Thank you for the read and comment Ericc, Thank you my friend. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Spirits play in swirling water" Your spirit, dear Sy, plays where it will. This one is a beauty. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I thank you fair lady. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks for revealing yet another Happy Place. Melton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melton, Thanks for the accept. |
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