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icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2006-04-23 06:34 AM

I

don’t know

but

do you

ever think

about

options

choices

that grow

or

do you

ever wonder

about

victory

or loss

that is

coming

when life

becomes

yearning

to know

©2006 by icebox
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[This message has been edited by icebox (04-23-2006 07:23 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-04-23 07:44 AM

Both...or should I say I think about it all...all of the time~~~thus the problem sleeping.

M

backtash123
Junior Member

since 2006-04-22

Posts 46

2 posted 2006-04-23 08:17 AM

I always think about these things when im looking for a new job, to leave my present.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2006-04-23 10:19 AM

Nope -- I take what comes.

I like your style in this....simple, direct, incisive, just the essence.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-04-23 10:23 AM

Ye be not a "Simpleton", dear man!

~ and this unpoem is actually a profound true poem!

EA

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2006-04-23 02:38 PM

Yes, dear icebox, but it is the thinking that becomes one's undoing so perhaps it is time to "take what comes" and just run with it. Anyway, I like what we all get from you - thanks.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-04-23 02:47 PM

icebox

Choices and options, yes...all the time. Victory or loss....not so much...but I am always yearning to know things. I also agree with EA...You are not a simpleton, but instead, very complex!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2006-04-23 03:02 PM

much more now than ever before

you wrote this so well...I'm in awe

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2006-04-23 03:14 PM

icebox,
Even the simple is too complex for me. LOL

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

9 posted 2006-04-23 03:24 PM

I think your habits are your own

IceBox

Your words are often considered

Dave

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2006-04-25 11:49 AM

I love the construction of this one. Simplicity, with impact.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

mariae
Member

since 2006-04-24

Posts 54
Denmark, Europe

11 posted 2006-04-25 12:56 PM

Oh yes...I think, but maybe a simple one like this could make me think like that more often.
Nice :-)

Maria

BROTHER JOHN
Member

since 2006-04-06

Posts 386

12 posted 2006-04-25 01:50 PM

Dear Icebox,

Thanks for making us think. Life is choice and there is always that path or paths we neverknow where they may have led. Some of the replies to this poem are stoic and this is sad.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2006-04-25 05:14 PM

I don’t know either icebox

but I sure like this unpoem.

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