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just thinking... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
amazing that the mind should lull fingers detour the pen each word that comes is just a cull on a scale of one to ten The eye begins to look around the heart is put to test to sculpt an image out of sound be it truth or jest emotion cursive, naked, raw unformed design in vapor sentenced by poetic law will take its life on paper perhaps the lines lean toward song others give vent to prose the gist of wit, short or long only the author knows ~ klassy lassy ~ July 14, 2005 (my muse has gone on vacation again!) ~ Karen ~ |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
this one has a good flow and you can feel the stream of each line and the rhythm of the words a poet who cares |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy You are a Klassy Lassy. Well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write here! I so understand! |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
(my muse has gone on vacation again!) Here's wishing you some instant karma, paul...p.s. Good poem shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very nicely woven rhyme. This is a hard form in which to write and still have it carry meaning. You did very well! Thank you for sharing it. |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Nice write...well done! |
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