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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-04-21 08:43 AM


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Martie's Child

21 April 2006


Across the garden
as a rose to a flower
Her name was Martie
and she was best dressed

A dandelion to the wind
each one, many a cede
Like that in variegation
her path in fortune to read

Happiness a daisy to pluck
"she loves me" or was that not
Untangled in ways of child
a daughter raised in tiny tot

Heaven her angel borne
calling back to Mommy on high
There was no answer, there was truth
there was love, and there was why


“By pureness, by knowledge, by longsuffering,
by kindness, . . . , by love unfeigned,”
2 Corinthians 6: 6 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2006-04-21 08:48 AM


Very well written.....better when read the second time around......
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-04-23 09:42 AM



A wonderful, touching tribute
to mother and child.

Thank you, Sir.

It is good to read once, twice, thrice.


backtash123
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3 posted 2006-04-23 09:46 AM


The poem was extensive in its emotional narrative. A joy to read the examination of the mothers response.
poettothecars
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4 posted 2006-04-23 09:51 AM


this poem was inspiried by After the Door is Closed
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