luminosity
Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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2006-04-19
04:42 PM
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this spirit of unrest has stirred up more words than it is worth and it even now demands a sequel be written and so a sequel it shall be yes a sequel or so it seems
long and slow is my exhale slowly but surely a thought is birthed that in the condition I am in staleness can be naught but a lie I have fresh air a plenty with each breath my cracks and imperfections murmur reminder hisses that I am not air tight
restlessness-innocent? I think not for I have flown and fallen hard and there is much to be said for the safety of the nest open mouthed and looking trusting for provision from Above
irritations? today irritation brings forth only one word-why? why when there are dragonflies glinting in the sun delicately colored butterflies floating on the breeze and thousands of shades of green to see on one single tree why when the buzz of insects and a bird’s open throated song accompany the sun’s embracing warmth I shall not be irritated with today tomorrow is not given me but today is
and while reason has opened its ears fragility hurriedly inputs that I am not finished and might never be I am a work in progress the Spirit that lives inside adds that wings are not needed to fly and that my delight is Heaven bound far beyond a thief’s grasp
a sequel was needed but gratitude is now the reason
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. .. ...thank you's to all whose thoughts helped birth this
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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2006-04-19
10:56 PM
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One of the best reads ever. TD
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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2006-04-20
12:11 PM
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Read this yesterday and got pulled away before I could make my mark with a reply that was befitting this piece....
"with each breath my cracks and imperfections murmur reminder hisses that I am not air tight"
Those lines were my favorite, however, this was full of wonderful lines..
"too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~
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suthern
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
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2006-04-20
04:34 PM
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Oh, lady... this is as lovely as the lady who wrote it... wonderful!!
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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
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2006-04-20
05:04 PM
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Very, very much appreciated. Lovely!
- Owl
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2006-04-21
06:09 AM
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this just reached out and touched me in a way I can't expalin
thank you
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luminosity
Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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2006-04-21
04:59 PM
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thank you all ladies....its about time I live up to my name que no? love you
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