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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-04-19 02:14 PM



Curl Me Spooned
… Until That Day
~*Marge Tindal*~ … ~Bill Haight~


Hold me ever-cherished
in nights of soft recline

Swirl your words of love about me
saying, “Darling, please be mine”~

Curl me spooned against you
cradle me in sweet passion spawned
Knowing that in renewed pleasures
our warmth will melt the dawn~


All you are … is all I need
for you mean the world to me
All I am … I give to you
one day past foreverly~


Until that day … and beyond
I will thank my lucky stars for you
You’re all I need … I promise to
love you foreverly … I do~



***A little bit o' love ... ~*Marge & Bill*~***

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com     

© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
HopeS
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1 posted 2006-04-19 02:22 PM


Forever love most beautifully expressed

Hope

Martie
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2 posted 2006-04-19 02:24 PM


Marge/sis and Bill/bro.....Lovely love expressed!  Thank you for this.  
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3 posted 2006-04-19 03:44 PM


So sweet and cuddly, Marge, it brought me a warm smile.

  Rae

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4 posted 2006-04-19 09:49 PM


Dear Marge:  Lovely poem!  Lucky Bill! (Lucky Marge too!)

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2006-04-19 10:17 PM


Marge, you and Bill are so fortunate to have found one another.
You have such a strong enduring love...
AND this is beautiful!!
~Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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6 posted 2006-04-20 10:11 AM


spooning is a gift to those in love, and you express it so beautifully

Betty
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7 posted 2006-04-20 10:44 AM


This is beautiful Marge
Love ya,
Betty

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8 posted 2006-04-20 10:52 AM


The title drew me in...the love kept me reading...lovely
Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2006-04-20 06:34 PM


And Bill's putting this to music...right?

The little wooden elephant got stuck somewhere in the boxes, might take some time to find it again.

Hugs dear lady,

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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10 posted 2006-04-20 07:16 PM


Beautiful love poem...I wouldn't have known it was a duet except you told me, so I did. Your styles work so well together!

~sky

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11 posted 2006-04-20 07:23 PM


Most romantic!!!  Very beautiful Marge.

believe in what your heart feels...

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-04-21 12:28 PM




"Curl me spooned against you"

Now that's love. Magnificent.

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13 posted 2006-04-21 12:32 PM


Oh, you are THE wordmaster!

Hugs,

Bubbles

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14 posted 2006-04-21 06:20 AM


Bravo!
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