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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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He sits on a shore With a line or two In the water At this time in his life Whether or not There is bait on the hook Is of no concern If never the less Something should come And for its own reasons Choose to tremble the bobber Well then yes perhaps It would be nice . . . To have some fish With his wine |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem gave me a vision filled with peace and serenity...the feeling flowed through me in gentle waves...I love it...thank you for writing it....**big hugs** |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
A truly lovely poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
John, this made me smile very much and I enjoyed this verse in particular very much.. ~Well then yes perhaps It would be nice . . . To have some fish With his wine~ it left me with a very peaceful feeling entwined with a certain wisdom..  seek the flame within yourself |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
Wow. I read a lot of your work, this is by far my favorite of the ones I've seen from you. Thanks a lot |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed, this, for three reasons, 1. B/c I love to fish for fish  , 2. b/c of the play on visuals...and 3. b/c I feel the same way...very nice perspective.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ You grabbed a 'moment-of-me' ... somedays I sit the shore, content to let the bobber drift ... reading a good book ... and being delightfully surprised if I get a tug on the line ... but find that it isn't necessary~ Other times ... I attack my fishing trips with gusto~ Enjoyed the scenery~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I read so much into this...probably more than I should~~  M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Has a very nice oriental feel to it That I find enjoyable Fish and wine When blended makes a meal; Only wine Reduces the feel. Gloom |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Loved this (as usual with your poetry)! Sometimes I feel this way - and some times I wish I did. - Owl |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
yes ::bows:: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed John.. Great imagery. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Beautiful writing John. Andrew |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Man, I wish this was about me but I am not even close to being that way, I wish I was though. Very nice, well done. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
John...I love to fish, just to sit and gaze at water and trees and things, so this poem really made me want to head out with my fishing gear and put a line in, with bait or not! Thanks! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a lonely day. |
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