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Open Poetry #37

A Further Taste

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2006-04-17 12:42 PM

And Eve knew...

God too was in the
apple.

Offering her a further
taste.

Even as she fell
from Eden.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-04-17 01:21 PM

OH MY!!! This gave me reason to smile..
Perfectly beautiful Eric!!

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2006-04-17 04:40 PM

Yes, women know lot's of things - how surprising that you know that they know.

Lovely as usual, Eric.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-04-17 09:09 PM

I do believe Eve knew
of cinnamon by that time,
as well.

Ericc, as always, you leave
behind you
a wonderful feast!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2006-04-17 11:48 PM

I wish I knew how to do that great big type

but thank you, thank you, thank you

for writing something so complex

in such an easily understood format

(and easily digested too)

Seriously, I love this.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2006-04-20 02:26 PM

Some tastes are worth any consequence. *S*

Beautiful write! *S*

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

6 posted 2006-04-20 02:44 PM

Perfect!!

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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7 posted 2006-04-20 03:47 PM

Exquisite -- well done sir, well done indeed.

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