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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-04-17 08:59 AM

What was missing
now taps
upon their shoulders
in easter bonnet colors,
while the glory of the green
bursts centerstage
amid the winter shadow,

and all upon them
that births the season
will gift the meadow
with a sugar coating
of their soul's possession,

and love is blinking,
in its cradle
of a peek a boo dream,
along my window
as life is falling,

you winked at me once,
boy of blue,

but never came
round again,

o sparrows on sycamores,
the morning widens,

but i've grown pale

for this boy of blue.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-17-2006 11:13 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-17 09:12 AM

awesome! I so feel this!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2006-04-17 09:57 AM

I understood the paling..but it doesn't last. We don't give ourselves enough credit sometimes.

I always love the way you say the things you say.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2006-04-17 09:33 PM

Very well done.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2006-04-17 09:44 PM

Way to go. Nicely done!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2006-04-17 11:56 PM

"the morning widens"

beautiful description, and yanno?

I always feel sad when that happens.

I guess I miss the color show of dawn...

hugs dear lady

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

6 posted 2006-04-18 12:19 PM

lovely very well lovely

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2006-04-18 01:36 AM

"and love is blinking,
in its cradle
of a peek a boo dream,
along my window
as life is falling,"

I love it all, Michelle, but
especially this part....
"a peek a boo dream"!! Love it!!
Hugs,
Ethel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2006-04-19 11:01 PM

Nice title Michelle...
Lovely images...you have such a talent for expressing your feelings. A gift.
TD

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