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Take out the story
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Take out the story |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Take out the story and what have you got? A spirit entwined with the workings of mind that can change destiny with a whisper of feel imperceptibly rising from out of the soul ~ and just like the sun this rise-up inside too autumn weak to exterminate love and the burn and blister of amazing grace. There is grace, you see, inside of a soul fluid in motion to make itself known … and, yikes, a mouse shivers my bones and all thoughts of love shudder and moan because summer, you know, was so long ago. And so with the grace invested in me I ran from that mouse in the house back into summer’s incredible feel in mental release from fear but there still is a mouse like there is love alone behind doors closed to it all. Take out the story and what have you got? A plain flesh and bone woman grown old alone in a house with a mouse! Helen / 17 April 2006 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I was wondering by the title what this was about now I see! I like it! |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
interesting word choice that definitly leaves the reader thinking. This is a poem that I will definitly need to read more than once |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent...your talent grows deeper and deeper with each poem! Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Dixie, openthoughts, and Eric! Wow, Eric, too deep and I may bury myself one day but not yet - too many stories still to tell unless something takes the story out and leaves just me! |
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