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tracie66
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0 posted 2006-01-09 05:13 AM


Take the moonlight from my heart
and a little sunshine from my soul
Place them in the palm of your hands
let your body soak them whole
Bathe yourself in moonbeams
feel them soft upon your skin
Smooth on a little sunray
and let it soak right in
Feel the warmth & brightness
start to flow within your veins
capturing the joy & happiness
your heart & soul
now retains

~~~~


If you can think of a better title please let me know, as I think mine isn't so great.

~hugs~
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2006 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2006-01-09 06:29 AM

A nice uplifting poem here..enjoyed the write..

Thank you...


Goldenrose.

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2 posted 2006-01-09 06:42 AM


Oh, I don't know...seems the title fits
the poem just right...

all the way around.  

Very nice, Tracie!
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3 posted 2006-01-09 08:57 AM

Thank you, Tracie, for the moonlight from your heart and the sunshine from your soul!

I can feel your warmth and brightness already flowing in my veins and I am experiencing joy and happiness!

You have a beautiful "heart and soul"!

Loving hug,
EA
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4 posted 2006-01-09 01:42 PM

It reminded me of a recipe...for serenity!



Seriously though, it was a rather like a bit of guided meditation.

Loved this. Love you.
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5 posted 2006-01-09 01:52 PM

~beautiful~
Dark Angel
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6 posted 2006-01-09 04:53 PM

this made me feel warm and fuzzy, made me smile big.

lovely Tracie

Mxx

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7 posted 2006-01-09 05:34 PM

I love this, and the title....
iliana
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8 posted 2006-01-09 06:02 PM

Tracie66, this is smooth as silk!  Good job!   ....jo
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9 posted 2006-01-09 09:44 PM

I think the title fits just nicely. Great poem to give up that lil reboost we all need sometimes

Julie
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10 posted 2006-01-09 10:33 PM

It is so sweet... Nice write
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11 posted 2006-01-09 10:38 PM

This is Beautiful!

Very much enjoyed,
Kristabell
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12 posted 2006-01-09 11:06 PM

Tracie~
It is so good to see you writing again,
heck fire ... I almost wouldn't care if it was just titled 'Another Beauty By Tracie'~

Girlie girl ... this is so beautifully penned ... and I think the soft touch of moonlight sheds just enough light to lend itself gently to the bathing of the sun~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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13 posted 2006-01-10 05:36 AM

Take the moonlight from my heart

now thats the way to start a poem
i love it !!!!
peace ~J
Fee
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14 posted 2006-01-10 05:46 AM

I think that the title fits the poem perfectly, it makes me want to see the moon tonight and reflect in beautiful thoughts.

Hugs, Fee

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15 posted 2006-01-11 05:21 AM

It was the title that brought me to this one!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC
tracie66
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16 posted 2006-01-11 05:39 AM

OMG!!!
Look at all of you shining here tonight

WOW!!!
thanks to everyone of you for such beautiful and uplifting replies, I appreciate everyone of you and thank you from the bottom of my heart, for reading and responding to my poem.

winged ~hugs~ floating in all directions.

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ManOfWolves28
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17 posted 2006-01-11 06:29 PM

I can imagine the perfect day in every part of this poem. I like stuff like this.

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....
tracie66
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18 posted 2006-01-12 04:35 AM

Hi ManOfWolves28~
Thanks for your reply and I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
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19 posted 2006-01-12 03:56 PM

how beautiful! maybe just title it

~take the moonlight~
tracie66
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20 posted 2006-01-13 12:54 PM

Dear midnitesun~  love your name, appropriate for my poem actually

thanks for your kind comments and the suggestion of title - which I think is beautiful but I think I'll keep titled 'moonlight - sunshine' for now...thanks again.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
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21 posted 2006-01-21 12:13 PM



Perfect just the way it is Tracie. Delicate.
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22 posted 2006-01-21 03:30 AM

The poem is beautiful, and the title fits perfectly

and then He created the horse...
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23 posted 2006-01-21 06:14 AM

Lovely!!!
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24 posted 2006-01-21 11:46 PM

I looked for the greatest number of posts and am glad I did. This was soo.. sweet and
lovely it even counteracted the evening news . I loved the concept and most particularly the title.

MP
tracie66
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25 posted 2006-02-02 07:41 AM

Thanks so much, I appreciated your comments and the fact that you took the time to read me

~hugs~ to you all
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
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