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Buried Treasures
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Buried Treasures |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Buried Treasures There is a heat of disappointment that rises, brings a sweat to the brow when missing the peacefulness before night's close, that words can bring. I feel too deeply all things, of life and death, and wish for eyes to open upon mine, releasing the prisoner from within. Tripping over this life has left inner bruises of betrayal, yet pearls of wisdom, that hang around my neck to remind me... not to pass that way ever again. I feel too deeply all things, of life and death, and wish for eyes to open upon mine, releasing the prisoner from within. Playing certain words over and over, rewinding those memories that bring me simple pleasures on those darkened days when I feel unclaimed... like today. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-18-2006 07:23 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I feel too deeply all things" ~ Can be the bane of a poet's existence! But then again, our heightened sensitivity can bring such joy! "when I feel unclaimed... like today." ~ Today you are experiencing a dark day in your poet's life. Tomorrow may it be a day of light and joy. Hugging you, Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you had one of those days too?  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Some days/nights, I miss hearing a real voice~~ thanks Dixie, Linda M |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I feel too deeply all things, of life and death, and wish for eyes to open upon mine, releasing the prisoner from within. When I feel this way - I go shopping!  People are good to be around when one feels a tad lonely. Great writing M. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
This is one of your best I have read so far a true master of a craft of putting a smile on my face a poet who cares |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sharon, that is exactly what I do...I window or bargain shop or even go to a movie alone and those who do know me know I speak to everyone I meet. Thanks for responding. poet...thank you for reading my words and your lovely poem It's nice to put a smile on someone's face M |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Nice write..."Tripping over this life has left inner bruises of betrayal"...DEEP! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this the other day, you know... and it struck me that it was meant for a moment that wasn't quite here for me yet... today the moment arrived. Thank you, Maureen.  |
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