Open Poetry #37 |
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Unhook The Stars (once more) |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
![]() **A tiny little re-hanging of some special poetic stars** ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() Oh my..Oh my Marge. This is breathtaking!! And you know.... ![]() I do...I really truly do! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Narge, this is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with me. |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The stars are unhooked.....and beautifully so! ![]() ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Another delightful offering Marge. You seem to have an endless supply of blissful imaginings. love, Joyce |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...So beautiful your poem, it replaces the stars, until the full moon give the night back its dark! ![]() |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a lovely place where your mind and imagination live. Love, Joyce |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A lovely poem by a lovely person, Marge. - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
That's some "tiny little re-hanging" Marge. It's a real beauty. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Marge, I love your creative thinking. You seem to choose the perfect word to plant an image... Great title and poem! miscellanea |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Thanks for sharing yet another surreal ditty. I like the way you play with our surroundings, unleashing their beauty. Rae |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Wow, gorgeous Marge! ![]() The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautifully written. When I was young, ahem! I sometimes felt that I was tethered to a star that did not seem to wander far. I visioned one day I'd be free. and wondered how and where I'd be. with my luck, stuck in some tree! Still tethered! LOL best to you martyjo [This message has been edited by latearrival (04-14-2006 07:06 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marge, I have certainly missed your beauties! So good to gaze upon your creations once again! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful Marge. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Love ya, Betty |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
I often find myself just staring at the stars, wondering. Next time I'll be looking at the stars, but I'll be thinking of you ![]() Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge this is a fantastic poem about shooting stars and faeries. I throughly enjoyed it. Huggs Kim
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
Words, when painted onto the canvas by a talented pen, leave a splash of color that threaten the setting sun. Your words however, have done much more than just threaten. Your words have captured the entire sky. Your pen has stolen my breath Marge. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Margie girl This is absolutely gorgeous ![]() I believe! ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie I believe in fairies so tiny and petite fairies from the garden playing hide n seek I try to catch a glimpse of them but they're very hard to see hiding behind the dandylions laughing all the while at me for you Margie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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