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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-04-13 12:09 PM







**A tiny little re-hanging of some special poetic stars**



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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1 posted 2006-04-13 12:20 PM




Oh my..Oh my Marge.

This is breathtaking!!
And you know....



I do...I really truly do!

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2 posted 2006-04-13 12:49 PM


Narge, this is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with me.
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3 posted 2006-04-13 01:32 PM


The stars are unhooked.....and beautifully so!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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4 posted 2006-04-13 01:50 PM


Another delightful offering Marge.  You seem to have an endless supply of blissful imaginings.  love, Joyce
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5 posted 2006-04-13 02:09 PM


Marge/sis...So beautiful your poem, it replaces the stars, until the full moon give the night back its dark!  
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6 posted 2006-04-13 04:00 PM


What a lovely place where your mind and imagination live.  Love, Joyce
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7 posted 2006-04-13 04:53 PM


A lovely poem by a lovely person, Marge.

- Owl

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8 posted 2006-04-13 05:15 PM




That's some "tiny little re-hanging" Marge. It's a real beauty.


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9 posted 2006-04-13 07:17 PM


Marge, I love your creative thinking.  You seem to choose the perfect word to plant an image...  Great title and poem!  

miscellanea

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10 posted 2006-04-13 07:45 PM


Thanks for sharing yet another surreal ditty.  I like the way you play with our surroundings, unleashing their beauty.

   Rae

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11 posted 2006-04-14 05:05 AM


Wow, gorgeous Marge!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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12 posted 2006-04-14 05:55 AM


Beautifully written.

When I was young, ahem!
I sometimes felt that
I was tethered to a star
that did not seem to wander far.
I visioned one day I'd be free.
and wondered how and where I'd be.
with my luck, stuck in some tree!
Still tethered!

LOL  best to you  martyjo

[This message has been edited by latearrival (04-14-2006 07:06 AM).]

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13 posted 2006-04-14 06:39 AM


Marge, I have certainly missed your beauties! So good to gaze upon your creations once again!
Betty
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14 posted 2006-04-14 09:53 AM


This is beautiful Marge. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.
Love ya,
Betty

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15 posted 2006-04-14 12:24 PM


I often find myself just staring at the stars, wondering. Next time I'll be looking at the stars, but I'll be thinking of you

Love

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

jody5
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16 posted 2006-04-14 05:05 PM


Marge this is a fantastic poem about shooting stars and faeries. I throughly enjoyed it.    Huggs Kim


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17 posted 2006-04-15 01:01 AM


Words, when painted onto the canvas by a talented pen, leave a splash of color that threaten the setting sun.  Your words however, have done much more than just threaten. Your words have captured the entire sky.

Your pen has stolen my breath Marge.

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18 posted 2006-04-15 02:59 AM


Oh Margie girl
This is absolutely gorgeous
I believe!
~hugs~
Tracie


I believe in fairies
so tiny and petite
fairies from the garden
playing hide n seek
I try to catch a glimpse
of them
but they're very hard to see
hiding behind the dandylions
laughing all the while at me

for you Margie




Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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