Open Poetry #37 |
The Ghost of Loneliness |
terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
The Ghost of Loneliness A world of ghosts living, breathing ghosts that no one can see or hear The truth is ... no one cares to see or hear Walking among us but apart ... Separate and severely blue the world of lonely spirits makes up me and you Isolated and alone in this world, no longer home No longer a place to laugh with friends and be free Ghosts of Loneliness prey on thee Behind the facade of prosperity lurks no concern for neighbor or friend Often a place with no respect or dignity no one cares to see ... where lonely ghosts meet their end terasinas 8/21/2003 |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Good words Dave Page |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Behind the facade of prosperity lurks no concern for neighbor or friend Often a place with no respect or dignity no one cares to see ... where lonely ghosts meet their end" Just perfect Teresa. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
((( tera ))) Precious sis, You never cease to amaze me. Excellent ! |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
Bodger, Lady, Uriah .. thank you so much for your kind words .. glad you enjoyed. tera |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an awesome piece here! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Loved that last stanza! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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