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tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-01-17 04:05 PM

you know i love u right?
from the bottom of my sick soul
and million lies that have been told
i love you more then life
so much i wish to be your bride
but through time i have been
taught a thing or two
to run away from the ones who hurt you
you hurt me so now i run

never will you hear my crys
for instead i will run an hide
instead of going to you face to face
to confess my love for you for so long
i wish i could but your stoned eyes
would shrivel me up and i would die

your coldness is so cold
that i freeze at just the sight of you
but i would freeze a thousand times and
more if only i could open your hearts door
just a spark of red on your cheek
would give me happiness for eternity
to make you smile again and love life

i do not write this because of ryhme
i wrote this cause of my lost love
he was sent from heaven above
for my heart to rest in his hold
til the day this story unfolds

a new lover i now possess
but you remain in my heart
you remain on my mind
forever til i die i shall love you
for no matter how i deny
we all know its a lie
when i say im over you

i depart from your side for good reasons
only to let you know that i did it for the good
for we both know its for the best
as i depart from your life
always know i rest in you forever shall this be
til the day we both are free
from these demons who chain us through vain

just know i forgive you but i shall not
ever take you back
for i have learned love is better apart
if all its goin to do is tear us apart
its better left alone and be sold
for this i stand bold i change not what i mean
for this is the end of the you and me
i miss the way we use to be

now go love and find peace

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2006-01-17 09:25 PM

damn one hell of a write , and the story holds strong emotion ... may peace also find you

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

2 posted 2006-01-17 10:19 PM

thanks for the response

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-01-02 11:21 PM

Nice writing...consider...you are loving this person because of the love that lives within your heart...not because they are lovable...and you walk away because love doesn't want to stay where its not appreciated...James

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