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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2006-04-10 11:06 AM

And are we so different
than the wind -

Seeking pleasure in the
sweep of a caress?

~
There are times when I am no
more than the breath across
your body.

And with fingers spread wide to
receive...

You offer me your distance.

In this moment...I am the
wind.

And you the hallowed ground
beneath me.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-04-10 11:24 AM

Ericc
Make sure she reads this.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-04-10 11:32 AM

Ericc

So beautiful!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-04-10 11:38 AM

Eric, I literally got little tingles reading your caressing words! Lucky be she for whom you write!

Sooo good to read you this morning!

Linda

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-04-10 06:14 PM

Magnificent!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-04-10 07:34 PM

it's always amazed me how you can say so much with so few words

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-04-10 08:31 PM

E X Q U I S I T E !!

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2006-04-10 08:40 PM

Eric,

  Just these lines would have perfection, yet you added more wonderful lines:

  And are we so different
  than the wind -

  Seeking pleasure in the
  sweep of a caress?

I also enjoy your writing so much!

miscellanea

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-04-11 12:20 PM

Oh, I almost missed this beauty.....much enjoyed this, Eric! *hugs*....jo

terasinas
Member

since 2006-03-24

Posts 91
Michigan ... The Great Lakes

9 posted 2006-04-11 12:31 PM

In this moment...I am the
wind.

And you the hallowed ground
beneath me.

This whole poem was a delight, but I truly love this part above ...

ahhhh, if only all men touched us like this and cherished us too, like the hallowed ground in your poem ... lovely! And ty

tera

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2006-04-11 11:51 PM

WOW Ericc such the breeze that becomes the wind....nice!

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

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