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The Tide
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The Tide |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Tide I often fail to see the tide The forces of my lives abide They skirt the shore and then withdraw And never seem to stay in store But that was but a stage of me As foggy as a misty sea And now I search above the mist Yet failure seems to still persist It seems a case of justify Shadows that I can’t deny Emotions, those that overflow Emotions that can come to blows I’ll never know the truth of bless I base the world on no and yes The texture of the shadows grey Has no positive of stay I only know that peace of mind Is only given to the blind |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"And now I search above the mist Yet failure seems to still persist" Yes, you indeed are in possession of a wonderful gift, that is using rhyme without having the essence of the poem suffer under it, which is it's idea. And when you do, and it works out like this, it's truly amazing!  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You words are always so lyriclly flowing and beautiful. Great write! Eric |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T.! "I only know that peace of mind Is only given to the blind" ~ Oh, dear! Does that mean that one such as yourself who sees beyond that of mere mortal man, is destined for the remainder of his Earthly days, to be without peace of mind?!? All kidding aside, I continue to be impressed with your poetry ~ and you the man!   EA  |
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