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Penning of Yawn
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Penning of Yawn |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Penning of Yawn It is the mind gone madly quiet until the dream appears split second timing full sound and screen ~ or was that your scream? The chase and capture then give and let live soundings of others, a fulcrum and then ~ the wondering of where’s when. A bridge and inlet, a source of some unknown masked are the faces until some eyes see ~ that quickening depth of reality. A shuddering shake, quivering real some hint of twi’s light a blink, and some touch ~ could be too much. Heart in race, this fabric in such flimsy sheer eyes open to dark some face so close ~ some heart too near when moments are heart beat eyelashes flicker some shudder in moonlight then breaking of dawn ~ the spell is broken by a moment of yawn. Yet, the heart is beating, too hard, and fast, and some knowing of coming ~ is some weathers spell cast. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie You pay attention to your dreams...because they are important and speak your name. I don't even remember mine most of the time.  |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"Yet, the heart is beating, too hard, and fast, and some knowing of coming ~ is some weathers spell cast." Lovely writing, exceptional ending, and when the end is good..  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"some hint of twi’s light" That's an incredible turn of a phrase Sunshine and this is a powerful poem. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Come what may Sunshine, love will see you through! :-) |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As always...striking and beautiful! Eric |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I agree this is a powerful poem! And well crafted too! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"when moments are heart beat eyelashes flicker some shudder in moonlight then breaking of dawn ~ the spell is broken by a moment of yawn." Awesome! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, you capture well the time between and the time among... misc'e |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"when moments are heart beat eyelashes flicker some shudder in moonlight then breaking of dawn ~ the spell is broken by a moment of yawn." Such a beautiful penning Karilea. Very much enjoyed. Hugs. ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ya wrote a little piece 'o me here, ya did -- one I like. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beauiful. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Inspired... believe in what your heart feels... |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
some. wouldn't know a sky...if they flew there. wouldn't know a wind if their ears bleed, but you dear one, in a dawn of red.... "shows" the poet's creed..... |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Right now I might be touched more by Martie's comment, than the Sunshine of the poem. Yet somewhere inside both are unified as one a poet who cares |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, this was like watching a silent movie that had a dreamlike quality,very surreal and engrossing. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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