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Love to ash |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Silent reverie engulfs the point of life and demonic will rejoices this internal fire for love these days and in those days useless and inert in partnership with dirt perceived within the confines of an egotist. So lies the spark of life like a disillusioned bride and this is destiny at the height of its desire signing off and cancelling love’s awakening with the evil confidence of a protagonist. Tested and found failing in spiritual beliefs a right and left shift of mind offers no relief for one in the grip and grasp of a psychic feel that closely imitates a bona fide truth. Love to ash and crash, crash, crash, the domino effect from one hearth and home to reviews in retrospect waiting in the ether like a dream about to be for the signing off of another wasted life! Helen / 9 April 2006 |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Wow! Powerful poem...I enjoyed this one. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"waiting in the ether like a dream about to be for the signing off of another wasted life!" Though I do know the feeling, I am not sure a life ever is wasted. Even broken lessons are lessons reviewed. |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"for love these days and in those days useless and inert in partnership with dirt perceived within the confines of an egotist." What powerful words! Great work! Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Sorry about that, but it seems to be part of the process.  |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Your line - "waiting in the ether like a dream about to be for the signing off of another wasted life!" is so sad because no life is wasted. Everybody has a purpose in life, it is just a matter of finding it. To find it we may need guidance or it may just come to us if we are lucky, but a life is never wasted, and I am praying you do not believe this of yourself. Well written. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all for reading my "vent". Yes, all things are indeed part of a process and I know deep down that there's no such thing as a wasted "life" - waste of "time" - yes, most decidedly! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes this was a very powerful poem!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen From a poem of mine: this wind takes it all and makes a fire again the sky is the color of a tomb and from the room the moan is calling to the moon where oh where is the pretty place where tears could weep clean and fall without making prints on face? That, and listen to icebox.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Helen, I do understand this well. Much enjoyed this very powerful piece....indeed powerful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I agree with Mr. C. 'Tho I understand the deep emotions involved. Hugs to you, dear friend.....jo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I agree with Mr. C. 'Tho I understand the deep emotions involved. Hugs to you, dear friend.....jo |
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