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shades of paul
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0 posted 2006-04-08 07:24 PM


The orange sinking low in blueberry sky,
among billows of white cotton clouds.
Just keep your green eyes on the horizon.
The sun will beam you a warm body feeling.
The thump of my heart desire seems on fire.
Sun slowly melts to a sliver of light,
soon will be time to bring on the night.
Sundown, the part of the day,
that takes my breath away,
makes my lips want to say,
I love you
paul


shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (04-08-2006 09:00 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-04-08 07:26 PM


funny how nature makes us get sentimental...I've felt it many times...you've described this so well
shades of paul
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2 posted 2006-04-08 08:19 PM


Thank you passing shadows for the reply...
I know what you mean.......paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-04-08 08:52 PM


Write pretty poem Paul.
TD

shades of paul
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4 posted 2006-04-08 09:03 PM


Thanks TD............Go Blue !.......paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-04-09 02:27 PM



"Sundown, the part of the day,
that takes my breath away,
makes my lips want to say,
I love you"


How lovely Paul.


shades of paul
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6 posted 2006-04-09 04:38 PM


Dear Lady, Thank you so much for all your comments on my poetry.  paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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