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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality 
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The orange sinking low in blueberry sky, among billows of white cotton clouds. Just keep your green eyes on the horizon. The sun will beam you a warm body feeling. The thump of my heart desire seems on fire. Sun slowly melts to a sliver of light, soon will be time to bring on the night. Sundown, the part of the day, that takes my breath away, makes my lips want to say, I love you paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you [This message has been edited by shades of paul (04-08-2006 09:00 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
funny how nature makes us get sentimental...I've felt it many times...you've described this so well |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Thank you passing shadows for the reply... I know what you mean.......paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Write pretty poem Paul. TD |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Thanks TD............Go Blue !.......paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
that takes my breath away, makes my lips want to say, I love you" How lovely Paul. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Dear Lady, Thank you so much for all your comments on my poetry. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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