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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-04-07 03:21 PM


I love the music
I love the way it makes me feel
So fresh,
So free,
So alive
When I dance I love the way you stare
The way I just don’t care.

I come up on to the dance floor.
Give my request to the dj
Give you my hand and start to move my feet,
with you.
I could keep doing this all night long.


I don’t care if anyone is watching,
Because I get chills up and down my spine
When ever I’m dancing with that man of mine
It feels so right that it can’t be wrong.

Just keep going
Because I don’t want to stop.
Just move your feet.

I don’t want to wake from this dream,
I don’t what to wake from this fantasy

i'm looking for you...always...

[This message has been edited by curiouse (04-07-2006 05:01 PM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-04-07 04:02 PM


this makes me want to get up and dance

cool write

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
2 posted 2006-04-07 05:00 PM


thankyou very much
smiles
curiouse

i'm looking for you...always...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-04-07 07:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
4 posted 2006-04-07 10:07 PM


Loved the Dance,paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
5 posted 2006-04-10 11:16 PM


what a nice dance!

Bubbles

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-04-11 01:49 AM




Keep dancing curiouse. You're very good at it.


HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2006-04-11 08:31 AM


wonderful feelings expressed

Hope

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
8 posted 2006-04-11 10:15 AM


thankyou all for your feedback i REALLY appreciate it.
thanx again.
curiouse

i'm looking for you...always...

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