navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » Trust
Open Poetry #37
Post A Reply Post New Topic Trust Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
fmlbarebackrider2001
Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138
West Texas, United States

0 posted 2006-04-07 06:21 AM


Taking the time to understand just how I work, and
Removing all the fear locked up inside, then
Unlocking all the passion hidding pushed away
Showing me a gentalness I'd never know, and
Turning me into the woman I should have always been.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

© Copyright 2006 Cory - All Rights Reserved
icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
1 posted 2006-04-07 12:17 PM


A great heart felt request!


Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-04-07 01:19 PM


I would like to quote your signature line which I feel aptly sums up your poem in my eyes:

~ "Know yourself before you try to know someone else."

Yes, indeed! ~ and it appears to me that you are doing just that!

Love & Light,
Earth Angel


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-04-07 01:50 PM


I just love acrostics!

this one was splendid!

cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

4 posted 2006-04-08 09:06 AM


Many people are on the same trail Beautifully written

Maggie

shades of paul
Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
5 posted 2006-04-08 08:50 PM


Very nice poem with feeling.....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

fmlbarebackrider2001
Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138
West Texas, United States
6 posted 2006-04-08 11:38 PM


Thank you all for the kind words. Every night before I go to bed I think I've figured out exactly who I am and then the next day I find another piece of myself. I've learned over the past couple of years that it's an ever changing thing and that who you are one day will never always be the same the next day.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » Trust

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary