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Morning Whisperer
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Morning Whisperer |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Blue, the falling shadows cape Thoughts that burrow an escape Still warm breath, leaves trail esteem To covet dawn within a dream The bed still warm, your scent remains My hand explores the space sigh claims Called from my sleep by shell chime song Within a dream to covet dawn Seek you pause or sanctuary Whispered hedges estuary Doubt pins curtain call in seem To covet dawn within a dream Yet rise to follow at your side Of quiet remnants, inner tide In silent touch where I belong Within a dream to covet dawn Copyright Kkh 3/8/06 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Magnificent penning...you have never disappointed me.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She doesn't disappoint me, either, Magnus... Kathleen, your writing only steps up from any one poem to another in all of your archive...this one is especially near to me in that you use so many of my favorite terms... so much so, it endears itself to my library. Thank you so much for all you offer to Passions! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"The bed still warm, your scent remains My hand explores the space sigh claims Called from my sleep by shell chime song Within a dream to covet dawn" All great lines but something about this one reminds me of... I'm not sure what but I love it. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
*sigh*.... and *double sigh* This is just so, so, so good. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ I revere the 'bringer of dawn' that whispers so gently~ 'The bed still warm, your scent remains My hand explores the space sigh claims' ... you give the morning a tender *sigh* to cherish~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i do so love all of your poetry (even though i don't always say so) but i do |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
ThisDiamond, They say if you want to be heard whisper. Now I believe it! Beautiful! :-) |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I thought this was magnificent! |
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