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Did I dance |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
One of my whimsicals Dave What it five or three did I sleep or was that a dream of sleep and when I woke I was sleeping Did I turn casting off in my mind things I should or shouldn't have done Did I work throughout a day and spend time talking to people or was that a dream Someone said once, am I a man or a butterfly He hadn't obviously studied a Chinese phrase relating to those who explore partners But for the record no, he hasn't produced any offspring although the blackbirds are interested. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Blackbirds, indeed! But I do think you are dreaming even now. And the butterfly, well just close your eyes again It will go away. You bring back some old memories Dave. Thanks. Scroll down the page look for TAG. Enjoyed. JL  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed your whimsical dance of thoughts!  Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I enjoyed your whimsy Bodger. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
JL -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Blackbirds, indeed! But I do think you are dreaming even now. And the butterfly, well just close your eyes again It will go away. You bring back some old memories Dave. Thanks. Scroll down the page look for TAG. Enjoyed. JL Do we ever in our minds leave something that was new and there Dave Earth Angel Member content? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I enjoyed your whimsical dance of thoughts! Linda Fortunately I am allowed a moment of fun Dave The Lady -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I enjoyed your whimsy Bodger. Some many words I have written to a Lady It is good to know her at least and last dave |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
A very interesting poem. To me it read like the feeling you get when you are dreaming while you sleep that you are dreaming. I've done it many times. I've had a dream while I have been sleeping about dreaming. It is very whimsical when you think about it. Quite nice. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very interesting dave My spirit will rise |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Good Morning Dave, You danced wonderful. Enjoyed the read. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write Dave...one of my favorites! Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I really liked this, Dave!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You made me smile, Dave. I quite thought of what the butterfly is...before it flies. No wonder the blackbirds are interested!  |
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