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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Timeless pine, in afternoon day-side face pulls supernatural peacefulness quiet damp air drinking light in well-tended fields of fresh breezes numerous flash of applauding years staring deep into the valley, invading my lungs pregnant with negotiations, mindless road menders hand me ownership of a well-tended home, with fat wheels and athletic seeds…chewing my lip drumming fingertips into the table of my existence, as if waiting hence forth with a desperate tone of inside voice… (thanks Barney) I smile jumping to my feet, thinking ”this house feeds me!” I feel eagerness, rushing to my side with flashing eyes, this way and that I’m exuberant, excited, curious God, I’m alive…even the dim recesses of the ground far below, options me, another day another smile, another good morning wave “never let me go” I think… Lifting my hands into some dance I’ve never known sucks me into celestial windows swirling around, like change absorbing middle distance intimately imposing some close fitting cap… uncertainty accumulating musical notes while tugging on my coat with seismic instability creating vast amounts of natural magic… swallowing me hard, insinuating I’m a woman gone wild…wild I say…a novella magnate casting me into turns of chance…hanging me in new balance… Life is filled with tremendous obstacles of curse and blood stained holds…plotlines of development writing, round about ways of assertion newness of sixth sense… Like a wandering observation…quietly moving from the shadows, dispensing secret crystals in full presentation, pausing to imagine things shaking to full bloom…. it is the order of change precisely resonating, new rules drizzling intermittent bursts of ribboned bridges almost invisible… yet there vibrating a chain reaction stair case I remembered was always there feeling the shock of freedom & human warmth ghastly intones of critical schematics… a map, a super plan clever artistic and well-spoken… it’s conceivable, unpolluted and exactly as I think, purging me into melodramatic arrival of salient points I want to walk into this fascination drink it’s notions… know the wide array of surprise feel the pain of change, each and every second changes to life to sort flying machines to love to greet music to dance, dance, dance to fall with intriguing gloss and pick ourselves up again... to know, we're still alive If it wasn’t for change, deepness in the sky would be very hard to define |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll be back... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
L'il darlin' ~ you can "define" anything, anyhow, and every which way! This was brilliant, mesmerizing, fascinating, touching, and completely captivating! This may be my favourite of yours to date! ~ and that is saying mucho grande!  You are incredibly talented, Lovely Lee! Loveya! Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how inspiring this is this morning!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - Why am I crying? So super is the natural described by you. I've been there, you know, and it is a "home" like none I've ever known before - well, not that I'm consciously aware of knowing. This is a definite keeper, Oh Lady of Super Talent. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"If it wasn’t for change, deepness in the sky would be very hard to define" None could define it more enthusiastically than you have here in your writing. This IS the sound of music... And the hills are alive! Beautiful write Lee J. Enjoyed. JL  |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is very inspiring; and the imagery is really good!!!!! I Like it!!!!!!!!! And I for got to say this is brilliant too! |
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