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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland 
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This poison deadly poison dripping down my throat Mercury, freezing my heart drowning inside myself the liquid sharp as a knifes edge drawing the finest line Between myself and my life this poison deadly poison dripping through my head. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
p.w.c~ Interesting write, flowing well and very vivid. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I don't like to think too much either . . . *grin* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Let it all the poison drain out ~ and get back to playing with crayons! ~ Angel Nurse's order!   EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerful write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
well done and then He created the horse... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
interesting certainly can read lots of things into it if you look. well done Julie |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Sounds like a song... I like it |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
thank you lovies... *grins* no littlewing I find it quite repetitive. always, xxx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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