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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-04-05 02:33 PM


This is placid enough I feel to be in the forum

Words are more of history but interaction and how you realised something you thought to write with someone who interacts, as they feel

Dave Page

1. Dave Page on Friday, December 17, 1999, 11:41:58.

I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go

2 2. Unknown on Saturday, December 18, 1999, 07:41:14.

I will eat all your words
Play with your head
revenge, revenge, revenge
You think you know me
well wait and see

3. Dave Page on Saturday, December 18, 1999, 16:44:34.

our identity has the wind
Your words had the wind
Your thoughts have only yourself
To consider
And carry my wish

4. Unknown on Sunday, December 19, 1999, 20:44:56.

Lost frozen in time
unknown,
died
who cares,
you create
what you have now
so drink your blood
your games all your
false names
maybe you will someday
find your head

5. Dave Page on Monday, December 20, 1999, 18:22:19.

On a mountain of skulls
You improve your dance
Monuments are merely an ally
For your dead-end
Egos build your monuments
Care builds worlds
You build your own life
To know yourself

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-04-05 03:09 PM


I like your time-line.
Puts life and meaning in the detail of your experiences.

"Egos build your monuments
Care builds worlds
You build your own life
To know yourself"

Profound wording.

Enjoy reading you Dave.
Great write.

JL


Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-04-06 01:02 PM


Thanks JL

Dave

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