Open Poetry #37 |
We all work on fragments this is how Sky started |
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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This is placid enough I feel to be in the forum Words are more of history but interaction and how you realised something you thought to write with someone who interacts, as they feel Dave Page 1. Dave Page on Friday, December 17, 1999, 11:41:58. I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair I will see my thoughts echo I see you standing there Storms above challenge my regard Dancing on my soul Raining through the shard I call to the wind Explosive as it flows Carry my wish As far as you can go 2 2. Unknown on Saturday, December 18, 1999, 07:41:14. I will eat all your words Play with your head revenge, revenge, revenge You think you know me well wait and see 3. Dave Page on Saturday, December 18, 1999, 16:44:34. our identity has the wind Your words had the wind Your thoughts have only yourself To consider And carry my wish 4. Unknown on Sunday, December 19, 1999, 20:44:56. Lost frozen in time unknown, died who cares, you create what you have now so drink your blood your games all your false names maybe you will someday find your head 5. Dave Page on Monday, December 20, 1999, 18:22:19. On a mountain of skulls You improve your dance Monuments are merely an ally For your dead-end Egos build your monuments Care builds worlds You build your own life To know yourself |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I like your time-line. Puts life and meaning in the detail of your experiences. "Egos build your monuments Care builds worlds You build your own life To know yourself" Profound wording. Enjoy reading you Dave. Great write. JL |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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Thanks JL Dave |
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