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Open Poetry #37

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Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

0 posted 2006-01-16 08:41 PM

a demon from hell
come to hunt you down
to rip out your soul
to turn your smile to a frown

he brings death
death with his very breath

it steals your hope
and brings only despair
when this abomination comes beware

this demon is relentless
he leaves none alive
you'd better hurry
go run and hide
for he is coming inside
one word is all it takes
to take your life wholly and completely
he shouts the word

D-I-I-I-I-I-I-E-E-E-E

-may the force be with you in poetry

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2006-01-16 11:13 PM

Interesting poem my friend. But I like the way you described the demon. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2006-01-17 07:18 PM

this was a very well writen write, I could feel a nice flow, keep up the awesome poetry

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2006-01-18 09:14 PM

And yet the cells themselves
vehemently disagree . . .

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