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poeticrockstar
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since 2006-04-04
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Houston, Texas

0 posted 2006-04-04 03:11 PM



yea, though I walk

through the valley of

the shadow of death

I shall fear no evil

for I have a bootlegged copy

of Hendrix at Berkeley

the high notes

float my mind

a gazillion light years

into another space and time

in my right hand -- pen and paper

in my left hand -- "A Course in Miracles"

a soul w/a charasmatic light

dreams overflow my pocket

I walk w/power and pride

sure-foot sensuality and mentality

that gluttons mistake for malaise

I make my way to speak

the Gospel of Creativity

to convert infidels into disciples

and to make this rock

my electric sky church

where the thoughts of

Keith Haring, Jean-Michel Basquiat,

and Andy Warhol are encrypted

on the left and right brain

I be

stimulating molecules to move

one nation under a groove

metaphorically moving mountains

with my thoughts and

singing bodies

pulsating rhythms

snapping fingers

creative fire is contagious!

BAILA MORENA BAILA...

y saca tu sol

let free your soul

liberate yourself

incinerate short-sighted mentality

we are one

and in oneness

we literally shift the universe

off it's axis

the spirits of Josephine Baker

beckons us to emancipate ourselves

from mental slavery

like Bob Marley signify

the gods of timbales

signal us to harmonize

and be one w/the spirits

that reside in the soul

of man and woman/kind

I am a soldier

dance, brown woman, dance

take out your light

LIBERATE!

LIBERATE!

LIBERATE!

© Copyright 2006 Christopher Whaley - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2006-04-04 03:24 PM


Timothy Leary...(and his brother "Really") ....and Hendrix has fender pick like teeth....with fret marks on his gums...Duane Allman could hit slide from one inch from the bridge with Statesboro Blues....Warhol would get chills from the shrills....and what about the dancing brown women....did Aretha roll with soul or what?...Janis, the white gal with black soul...and just who was left behind with the purple haze and California Sunshine...acid for the soul....man's way of seeing what wasn't yet to be...and yes, I'll take one more toke....just to remember the good old days....but I can't remember them clearly....???...But I've been where you are...I think?
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-04-04 06:21 PM




I think I was there too or... is this a flashback? Venceremos!

I love it poeticrockstar! Great way to start! Welcome.

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2006-04-04 06:29 PM


Welcome free spirit...a fine begining..thank you..

Goldenrose.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-04-08 04:45 PM


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Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2006-04-08 04:48 PM


Good stuff Enjoyed obviously!! I look forward to reading more..and WELCOME!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

StevenS
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6 posted 2006-04-08 07:24 PM


Rolls like the river! Welcome! :-)
Martie
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7 posted 2006-04-08 11:34 PM


I remember having this feeling at Berkeley in 62.  Welcome to Passions.
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8 posted 2006-04-09 02:10 AM


First of all, welcome to PIP.  You will love it here.  This was a neat poem.  Kind of humourous, but kind of musical.  It had a little bit of a lot of things to it.  I enjoyed reading it and found I was able to read it fast, which is unusual for me due to an eye disorder.  I think your poem is well done.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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