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G.G.T Ismail
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0 posted 2006-04-04 10:45 AM



At the bottom of the sea
shatters of my heart
sunken by sollitude
while longing for your love
Darling if your faith in god is true
ask him if i ever stopped adoring you
Even after all this time
i still do, oh yes i still do

The light blue sea
mirror of my heart and soul
the times that it has seen me cry
hearing storys never told
if your love for me was pure
then why do you make me endure
this eternal sollitude

I lost you in the shadows of no return
and my fire has stopped burning
I have searched for you everywhere
but you are impossible to find
If you remain just a shadow
why cant i get you out of my mind ?

And you who knows where you are
you might be close, you might be far
Who knows the next time we meet
maybe our story will be complete
and gets lost in the depths
At the bottom of the sea

Inspired by A.Dominguez

© Copyright 2006 G.G.T Ismail - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-04-04 11:00 AM



Welcome to PiP !

What a lovely penning this is~

Enjoy your stay in this gentle circle of friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-04-04 11:21 AM


An excellent entrance to Passions you have made.
I do hope you enjoy your stay with us.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

curiouse
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england
3 posted 2006-04-04 11:28 AM


wonderfull,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

aliway
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With in your eyes
4 posted 2006-04-04 03:25 PM


Welcome to pip
This was amazing

*leah

We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom.

*DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER*

sweetberry
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5 posted 2006-04-05 02:49 AM


First, let me welcome you aboard. Secondly,  good job and I look forward to seeing more of your work!!!
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