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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-04-04 09:05 AM


It pulls me through the air

The length of my rope, a sigh
It lifts me off the ground
This kite I fly so high
It’s up and heaven bound

The cord is tied my heart
The string unwinds my head
It is the phantoms part
That fears the string will shred

It pulls me through the air
I feel the wet of clouds
I have no way to veer
This lace that is my shroud

I have no way to wind it in
Or add a bit of weight
The sigh is strong but much too thin
And time has set a date

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-04-04 09:07 AM


I have no way to wind it in
Or add a bit of weight
The sigh is strong but much too thin
And time has set a date

that nasty ol time machine...???

hugs to ya Mr. Poet

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2006-04-04 09:28 AM


It pulls me through the air
I feel the wet of clouds
I have no way to veer
This lace that is my shroud

I have no way to wind it in
Or add a bit of weight
The sigh is strong but much too thin
And time has set a date

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well Ive always loved you wet with a sigh  
your humility always pulls me mothy heart strings me sweet Sy-guy.

*ww*



SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2006-04-04 09:32 AM


I have always found you poetry to be such a pleasure to read. Beautiful, as always. You are a wonderful poet.
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2006-04-04 09:35 AM


Some lace is stronger than you think
I love to read lyrical lines
Thank you
Love
Liz

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