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Open Poetry #37

I, you and we

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2006-04-04 06:11 AM

Theres no words to say.
Not a drop of ink left in this pen.
this heart beats lost its thump.
just in the way.

where am i
where are you
where are we

Theres no words to say
my heart just feels that way
hide me closer
tuck my heart away

who am i
who are you
who are we

incomplete
lost
whatever happened to familiarity.
no words left to say

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

1 posted 2006-04-04 07:02 AM

i love it.
your poetry is wonderfull,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2006-04-04 04:42 PM

It's easy to feel the heartache in this one. It is a good exression of emotions.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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