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ErikaStaples Junior Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 24SC |
Always Thoughts are packed away with the luggage that I bring. Leaving down this road today listening as birds sing. They sing a song of sadness because I leave never to return. Yet I must confess I’ve taken a better turn. The winding road ahead you say takes me further away, but it takes me closer instead to the dreams I’ve dreamt of everyday. Your face will come with me and my love will too but no matter how happy I’ll be I’ll always wait for you. Hope can die in an instant |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed reading your poem! May the road ahead take you to your dreams!  Love & Light, Earth Angel  |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
your poem brings with it many emotions. It's almost as if the poem itself were alive |
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mighty mouth Junior Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 24Missouri, USA |
wow. that was awesome. it full of emotions, and not cheezy in any way. that's hard to accomplish. Well Done! |
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ErikaStaples Junior Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 24SC |
Wow, thank you all for the wonderful comments. I've been working hard on my next book, and am pleased to know someone likes my work! |
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