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carpets, ceilings and different gods
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carpets, ceilings and different gods |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there were no overshoes just the toes of water feet climbing windows looking for higher ground in a glass of someone's drinking the clouds are mothers without mates littering on purpose as if the giving is better than the receiving but then they would have that religion since they are god's carpeting and think the grass people are heathen needing to be saved from tan or the final weed free burning on their last day judgement every wednesday afternoon 'bout 3 'cept when it rains or on holidays _______________ daark scribblenote: about the rain this am, and the lawn that gets mowed on wed..the clouds seem to have motherly notions, and the grass well it seem childish..etc |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...How about a scribble-note. My mind can't quie grasp the meaning of your words today. Ingriqueing, as always, you are!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lol...now little neighbor I thought you would be jumping in puddles with this one..thanks for the eyes babe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh!! I think I got it. It hasn't started raining here yet! I jump with bare feet, not overshoes. LOL |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"since they are god's carpeting and think the grass people are heathen needing to be saved from tan" What a metaphor! To think of cool grass under bare feet ot on hot summer days.... The idea of summer right now is so enchanting as the wind is still cold and clouds spread themselve like gray blankets over my yen for blue sky. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks lady friend..it is heading your way I think. _____________ ms kl, thanks ms, am pleased you enjoyed the teeth in this grin. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Could never resist boyish grins or puddles, barefoot or not, and I wonder if heathens mind dandelions and bachelor buttons. Somehow, I'm guessing NOT....always liked the blue tenacity of morning glory, too. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dark you have that way of saying things, like no other, and that way of allowing the reader to see through your eyes.....you are pure poetry...   And so it those we live with |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms KL thanks so muccccch.. __________ lady lauren, thank you for your way of brushing my smile ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the clouds are mothers without mates ~*~ This lent thought to much more than clouds... it even encompassed the fogs of the pass... among the hills and valleys... when it doesn't rain, but you still end up wet. You made me [again] remember some very special times... thank you. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
there were no overshoes just the toes of water feet climbing windows Love this - I am a windowpane watcher when it rains, staring at the little patterns the raindrops run and waiting to see which one gets back up from the bottom to pull up another with it. We need rain so badly here. Perhaps your poem will bring some to us.  I can already see the rainbow in your pen.Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"the clouds are mothers without mates" Stranger I wait for your poetry so I can envy you your way with words. |
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