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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-04-02 02:53 PM


i turn ,
I look out into the worlds
I see fields of laughter and greenery.
I smell everlasting bounds of flower and beauty
The sun becomes the moon and I see man and woman

I see life,
I see eternity and
I see life after death,
I see happiness
And I see sorrow
I see death,
And I see birth

I can hear the children playing,
I can hear the woman screaming,
I can hear the men groaning,
And I can hear life take its course.

I can feel the different textures
Of material and spiritual objects
I can feel people dying,
I can feel them being born,
I can feel the world growing.

I can smell sweet perfumed scents,
And I can smell nature

I see me and you
I hear me and you
I feel me and you
I smell me and you

We are...Me and you

Forever...
We are.
Lovers never to depart...
Never to depart

Curioustity is a fine gift...

© Copyright 2006 whatever you want it to be - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-04-02 02:58 PM


I enjoy the zestfulness of your writes. They are earnest and full of passion. They are all-encompassing and compelling reads!

Your eyes, ears, heart, mind, and soul are open to the world without and to your world within!

Love & Light,
EA

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-04-02 03:00 PM


Beautiful and emotive write from your heart found in the words here.  Nicley penned.
StevenS
Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
3 posted 2006-04-02 04:02 PM



Forever...
We are.
Lovers never to depart...
Never to depart


Just a natrual part of it all! Enjoyed curiouse!:-)

shades of paul
Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
4 posted 2006-04-02 04:32 PM


Very nice......................paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

curiouse
Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
5 posted 2006-04-03 05:48 AM


thankyou earthangel for your kind words you will never know how much they mean to me but i love your kind nature for them.
thankyou gentle spirit for your kind words and stevens and paul for your comments
they are much appreciated,
thankyou.
curiouse

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