Open Poetry #37 |
The Secrets of the Wind |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
THE SECRETS OF THE WIND 26 December 2001 I want to touch the secrets of the wind, cradle them with the softness of earth thoughts bathed in leafy solitude. I want to invite them to open in fresh-breathed innocence, - delicate buds, eager to learn the empathy of light and the solace of shadow - and watch them blossom to their fragrant fullness. I want to read them like slow word poems over and over and glean more silvered wisdom each time leading forwards on clean-aired pathways of light. I want to hear their messages whispered softly on each gust for those who suspend all else to hearken. I want to paint them with sunshine and soft petal rainbows and dance them into colour streaks across the sky and drift them earthwards on a flock of wild geese. I want to draw them like five fingers trailing irregular spirals in honeyed sand. I want to taste them quietly on my tongue pausing to savour each misty unphotographed image, feathered with a brush of mystery. I want to wrap them around me and swim slow-motion figures of eight from one to another. I want to emerge enlightened and embraced. - Owl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am grateful for this poem... thank you, Diana... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Absolutely Lovely! :-) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana...you do touch the secrets of the wind, and beautifully!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I want to emerge enlightened and embraced." You have. You have. Stand silent in a forest, And listen to the wind The wind uses the leaves and branches To spin out stories told once And never again. Each time you go you will learn; But beware, Knowledge will be demanded of you If you dareā¦ JL |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sunshine, what a sweet and beautiful thing to say! I am so glad and honoured that it made you happy (or something else good). Thank you passing shadows. I'm glad you thought so. Steven, thank you very much. Martie, thank you. It feels that way to me, too. I love the wind. Thank you JL. That makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you also for your poetic response. Aside from the library, I like to save the poetry that I really love in separate folders named for each poet and labelled by the titles of the poems so that I can read the poems offline. If your response has a title, please let me know. If it is part of a longer work, please post it in its entirety. I would appreciate it if you would drop me an email when you do (or if you have already done so) because it is expensive to be online in South Africa, especially if you have a Pay As You Go phone, as I do. - Owl |
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