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Melody
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Melody |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the morning glaze of winter Still encased in jewel box pearl Dormant branches reach undaunted Palms upturn and fingers curl Poised to cup the sun forbidden Waiting patiently to find Readiness to be forgiven Motioning in welcome signed White the wind forever blowing Making turns to wander on Modest clings the timber showing Charcoal tracings rest upon Dark the bark of winter passage Motion of the hands conspire Warm within a loving message Sings the flames entwine reach higher Hum in earnest reconcile Draws your shadow to my form In the morning glaze recital Played together wild and warm Copyright Kkh 1/16/06 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A mellifluous melody! I enjoyed each and every line of it! What a nice feeling you left the reader with in your closing words ~ "In the morning glaze recital Played together wild and warm" ~ Oooo! This was loverly!  EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seldom, am I able to catch you where you have missed a beat...this is no exception. Excellente...muy excellente |
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mighty mouth Junior Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 24Missouri, USA |
you can very much feel the melody of this piece. it's very smooth. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
an execllent gem (pun intended)...loved your lines and use of color...an exquisite polishing of this remarkable jewel... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kathleen, this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL writing, I am glad I didn't miss it. Hugs. |
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LifeSinger Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25Kentucky, USA |
"Dark the bark of winter passage Motion of the hands conspire Warm within a loving message Sings the flames entwine reach higher" WOW, I loved this poem, but these lines were my favorite! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Palms upturn and fingers curl Poised to cup the sun forbidden" Beautiful poem... you write such lovely pictures. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
FANTASTIC!..........PAUL shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, Your words and rhythm melt into a melody! Beautiful writing, as always. ~misc~ |
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