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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-03-31 08:56 PM




the peace of knowing

listening to the children

full of empty rage


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Martie
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1 posted 2006-03-31 09:43 PM


icebox

I kind of wish my rage was empty like a child...but I guess part of being grown up, is knowing.  I love this form...to say so much with so few words....you do excell in that!  

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2006-04-01 02:45 AM


And now I must be as a little child because my rage compartment is empty - the peace of knowing that rage pays no dues and brings no rewards is perhaps just one tiny step up the ladder - if there be a ladder, of course.  A wonderful write as usual!
iliana
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3 posted 2006-04-01 04:09 AM


You're just wonderful, Mr. C....jo
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