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Open Poetry #37

White Dandruff

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2006-03-31 04:51 PM

White dandruff balding on rocky peaks,
River mouth tributaries eating waterfalls,
Breathing air in natural fresh deodorants,
Fantastic sightseeing of deep cleavage,
Organisms of ecstatic derived pleasure.

Feathers touching the nerves of the sky,
Twitching breezes of sensual arousals,
Tranquility merging with nature’s love,
Upon a melody of lovemaking songbirds,
Cuddling doves cooing for so much more.

Springing sunshine revolving starry nights,
Full moon silvery lake mirrored projections.
Whispers vibrating chorus of serenities calm,
Campfire cracking clear meditative heavens.
Light years theatrics staged for redemption.

Lost emotional artistry writing upon a heart,
Tearing words occupying springing feelings,
A pen isolated, riding pages rippling time.
Verse of lost poets haunting a night sky,
Listen contentedly to the music of poetry,
As white dandruff dusts the high notes.

D.Lester 03/30/06 ©
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-03-31 07:19 PM

so many awesome lines here

excellent!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2006-03-31 07:22 PM

"Lost emotional artistry writing upon a heart,
Tearing words occupying springing feelings,
A pen isolated, riding pages rippling time.
Verse of lost poets haunting a night sky,
Listen contentedly to the music of poetry,
As white dandruff dusts the high notes."

So beautiful, from the beginning
to the last verse.
Hugs,
Ethel

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