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dickiegreenleaf
Junior Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 10
Canada

0 posted 2006-01-16 01:13 PM

Lovers spend all night in each others arms
I find solace in sleep.
Passion soars but slowly unwinds
In my own arms love will keep.

Smiles mask the fear of time
And i find solace in sleep.
Gazes held and hearts left broken
But love for me is far too deep

Can i explore another time and place without myself?
Will the love for me undo what i have created for you?

I will live and I will die
But I find solace in sleep.
The cherub fails to sting my soul with joy
And its not with happiness I weep.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-01-16 02:46 PM

Excellent work... so lonely.

I am intrigued by your name.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2006-01-20 04:52 PM

interesting write...especially intrigued by the line:

"Smiles mask the fear of time"

kevinbrianwright
Junior Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

3 posted 2006-01-20 04:55 PM

I agree Excellent write "Bravo!"

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-01-20 05:04 PM

Your poem makes me feel sad because it makes me have empathy for the person in it.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2006-01-25 12:06 PM

impressive.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-01-25 12:59 PM

Hauntingly sad. May the tears that you weep become ones of joy.

EA

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2006-01-27 01:35 AM

may your weeping turn to laughter~

your choice of words allowed me to feel your loneliness and sadness~

Great work~

~ARH

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2006-01-31 03:02 PM

I like this alot.

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

9 posted 2006-02-02 12:07 PM

so much to feel and fathom from your write poet...

the saturated soul rooted deep in such an emotion
the fear of inevitability
and yet, we are bound to love none the less
amidst all the questions roiling in our souls

much to fink on you've given him

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