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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-03-30 07:13 AM


Phasing

This abstract has a thousand doors
A ripple to a thousand shores
A note that starts a symphony
A walk into infinity

Its make up is a single point
You need a thousand to anoint
To build a reference in the mist
And touch the mental of the gist

To be a phantom on the path
To be a spirit of its bath
To enter in the very seem
To know it’s really not a dream

Just wet your feet the pictures frame
And let them sink into its aim
Just leap into illusions door
A moment walk forevermore

The hardest part is letting go
To flow into the rivers flow


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1 posted 2006-03-30 07:50 AM



We hold on so hard, don't we, Sy?






Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2006-03-30 08:07 AM


This reminds me of Mary Poppins when they all jump into the chalk drawing in the Park.

yes..I watched it just the other day.

Morning Sy!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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3 posted 2006-03-30 08:14 AM


Seymour darling man I like this one, it reflects the colour of your art beautifully. An excellent piece, as always beautifully constucted and has a quality that yells out your name
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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4 posted 2006-03-30 09:37 AM


Good morning, Sir T !

"The hardest part is letting go
To flow into the rivers flow"

D'accord! I agree! But when we do let go and go with the flow, life's journey is so much easier!
Tanny

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA


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5 posted 2006-03-30 09:44 AM


enjoyed this piece very much
guess cause i can relate

Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

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6 posted 2006-03-30 01:10 PM


the hardest part is letting go

I do agree Sy

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7 posted 2006-03-30 01:18 PM


This says much about life...when one is relucant to let it go.  Wisdom in your words Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2006-03-30 01:47 PM


"To be a phantom on the path
To be a spirit of its bath
To enter in the very seem
To know it’s really not a dream"

Beautiful writing, as always,
dear Seymour. Thank you for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2006-03-30 04:18 PM




"Just wet your feet the pictures frame
And let them sink into its aim
Just leap into illusions door
A moment walk forevermore"

Excellent as always Sir.

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