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Where Silence Lies
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Where Silence Lies |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
I felt the need to post a second poem. I feel fairly creative in the early hours of the morning. In, my opinion, it isn't as strong s my first but it was easily more complicated since I encoded some information about me in a rather complicated fashion Where Silence Lies Scarlet, painted in the distance an imprint of beauty and sorrow six velvet tears fall from eye to earth faded petals from the rose In the early mourning glow I lie wide awake and drowned in every moment passion consuming, controlling my dreams a masterpiece of crimson Each thought is now a spiral Beyond hope and past all saving As the gentle smoke still rises I've found where Silence lies [This message has been edited by openthoughts (01-16-2006 09:41 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions, openthoughts. There is so much to read here and so many good poets -- don't feel overlooked. This is some really nice writing and I will keep my eyes open for more. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..so much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Yeah its hard to get people to read your poems they'd rather look out for there buddies names instead of the new poets but yeah was a good piece |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
I like it. Good job |
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EagletonDiva Member
since 2006-01-11
Posts 107 |
Silence is ever intoxicating, ever eluding and always seeking control. It carries great power with it. Loved the poem. Keep writing |
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