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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-03-30 06:54 AM


A Craw Stuck


Mayhap you heard wrong, for the
Air you blow is to slow
Round about our ankles now, but
Chillingly, you blow
Hark the herald of the Ides

Topsy-turvy’ing the time, so an
Ode will not become you.

Allow me a
Prayer, a plead, a pledge that
Rain you should bring, Mother, and
I shall not complain, but please
Lay low the blow, the month is almost over.




" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2006-03-30 07:15 AM


~Smiling~ I didn't notice the acrostic ...
Nicely done...

M

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2 posted 2006-03-30 08:22 AM


Kari dearest girl, what a true delight this was, and the form was just perfect. Shine on sunshiny one, you always brighten the sky of PiP's
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x
See when I'm well enough I try to come and visit, and although these days I'm quieter than I used to be, I still come and browse, and read your treats. x x x I don't ever forget these poets who smile and hold each other in their loving arms.
Take care darling heart

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

StevenS
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3 posted 2006-03-30 09:25 AM


I hear ya Sunshine, on with spring and then the summer! These late frosts can be a bummer! :-)
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-03-30 10:54 AM


Good morning, Spring Sun!

Enjoyed your clever spring creation!

Spring showers will soon be on the way ~ and will get the flowers, trees, and grass a growin'!

Happy Spring!
Love & Sun Light,
Linda
Flowers

Martie
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5 posted 2006-03-30 11:54 AM


Sissie.....This is wonderful, as you are!!  
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2006-03-30 12:19 PM


smile...and I'm just counting the minutes of the days. Not even noon and I'm waiting for it to be over. sighs



I always read ya yanno. Sometimes I just get quiet. That would be hard for others to believe, but I think you know.

(freakin' Ides... )

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displaced
7 posted 2006-03-30 12:22 PM


April, she comes...and not too soon for me

loved this write!
it's a keeper!

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